C.J. Mustang

Chapter 4 Everyone in the house figured that Alima use up all of her energy cursing at Suoh, because she had fallen asleep upstairs. "Did she know that was my ...

I am so sorry that happened to you! My school just did an activity about drunk driving, and my mom had just talked about it the night before. I also ...

Hey, loved your poem! I just gotta say, for the people who were dissing your poem...IF YOU DON'T LIKE WHAT IT'S SAYING, DON'T READ IT!! I, for one, thought it ...

Hey, loved your poem! You don't need to change a thing! If you ever entered a contest for poetry, you should use this one. I found absolutely nothing wrong with ...

I know! It's a clock! Awesome poem! I won't give you the 2:1 ratio, since people already have. What would make your poem a bit better is if you put ...

I love this poem! It's so cute! I don't think you have to change anything to it, but I would love it if you expanded it. Although, you could maybe ...

I defenitely liked your story--just maybe could you put it into parts so people who want to read it don't get turned off by the length? I only saw a ...

Thank you for the review, JW. And well, since their dad's a high level business man, he can afford seperate rooms for the kids. Maybe I should add that in ...

hey Cassandra! I'm CJ. How are you? OK, so here's the deal: for every story or poem you write, you have to have at least 2 reviews. no chat speak. ...

Chapter 3 At the end of the day, Alexandra waited obediently in front of the stables as the sun was just barely setting. Lady Beth kept her word; she came ...

I like your poem a lot. where it said: We jump people for fun ‘cuz that’s gangsta! Well, not really fun ‘cuz fun aint gangsta! I thought that was kind ...

I'm sorry, but I also have to mention the spelling errors. You should really fix those. That's about all I found. :wink: other than that, it was awesome!

Chapter 1 A maid turned into the women’s corridor, heading for Lady Cassaras’ room. She carried an almost full laundry basket on the curve of her hip, and her scratchy ...

I liked it, and I can't wait to see where it's going! there were only a few things I saw wrong with it, though: at the parts where it said ...

don't worry; 4 dragons are going places: Cadmus, Suoh, Alima--Bakers City Kaida--Talbe And also, there are humans in the eggs, not dragons. sorry if it was too confusing. :) I'm ...